Thursday 22 September 2016

My writing sample

I woke up on a perfect sunny day in my snuggly warm bed with blades of light screaming through the curtains. I thought it would be a good day to go for a walk in the woods. I spring out of bed and before I walk through the hall I hear my parents snoring their heads off, it was so loud they sounded like chainsaws cutting down a trees. I didn’t want to disturb them so I left a note. “Hey Mom & Dad, I’m going for a walk in the woods today, I’ll be back later. -Owen.” I stepped through the door with a witch in my stomach brewing up a feeling of excitement, I take a deep and refreshing breath before walking aimlessly down the street. I find myself at the start of the rail trail that leads through the deep dark woods. The walk got a little boring because I've walked this trail millions of times, I decided to stay from the path and wander around for a bit.

I pass I sign with a really creepy font that said “ Do Not Pass This Point!” But I ignore it because really how bad can the woods be? I pear at all the trees and flowers, it was amazing I've never seen this part of the forest before. As I got deeper and deeper into the forest, the beautiful flowers start to fade by and things became more and more stange. It was the kind of strange that made you question why you're even hear. But then it got even more strange. There were no more trees all except a little grove of trees that looks like it had been planted in an empty meadow in the middle of a forest.

I walked into the little grove and the first thing that caught my eye was a little pond. The pond looked magical it had lots of little flowering trees surrounding one side of it, the water was as clear as crystals it was really alluring.  I take off my shoes and the water felt like magic. I make a splash as if it were the best time of my life, I see little circle ripples repeating over and over, following that a big rumbling shake pushes me into the water soaking me completely. I felt like I was moving but how could that be? Land Moving? I slowly steady myself and walk to the edge of the grove. I was moving, the grove had legs; really big ugly legs with even bigger feet that had moss and dirt wedged in between the toes. I came too close to the edge and I fell onto what I thought was in a giant dirt nose with moss growing all around it. I find myself staring into two big beady green eyes as I sit on the ogers nose. I spy around the edge of the ogre's head and I saw a trail of fallen down being pushed over by two giant ugly feet.  

I hear screams coming from behind me, I quickly swiveled around and I saw a terrorized town running from this ogre .(Which i’m sitting on) The ogre stomped his loud feet, with each step he took was like an earthquake one after another. He walked over to the docs and picked up a large white boat. “I don’t know why he wanted that boat when there are other things like money or houses, “ Oops.” I said with a worrying concern in my voice. I think I said that out loud because the ogre is taking a roof off someone's house. This had gone far enough, I had to stop this oger from destroying the town. I started to scream” HEY, HEY STOP!”

His eyes meet mine as he look at the little speck that sat on his nose. He looked at me as if he didn’t know I was there. He picked me from the top of his nose with his big dirty moss covered fingers, I asked
him “Why are you stealing these things?” He gave out a long depressing siey with his incredibly deep and unclear and slow voice ” hhhhhhhh!” A gust of his breath hit my face as he said that.” I’m lonely I just wanted company.”  “Well, I could be your friend.” I said. The ogre's face filled with happiness. He replied with a loud “YEA!” He held me in his hand and he thundered back into the woods. Past the beautiful trees and into the empty meadow where there was a big bite out the earth missing. He climbed back into his hole and it was like it was just a grove and nothing else.

As I returned to the town giant foot marks were permanently engraved on the street with little cracks shooting out the sides like lightning. I could people peering around the corners of buildings so see if it were safe. I guiltily walk home and try to act as if nothing had happened. I cheek on my parents, I was expecting them to come rushing up to me to see if I was ok. That was not one of those times, they were still snoring their heads off.

Sunday 18 September 2016

Aims Games

On saturday I got up bright and early to make a father's day breakfast for my dad. Once I finished eating my pancakes with MT Bacon on the side drizzled with a stream of syrup I went back to bed. About 10 minutes or so later I realized I had Aims Games. I had totally forgot about it and so rushed out to the kitchen to make a dark chocolate brownie and a weet-bix slice to take for our lunch boxes. I rushed back to my room to pack my bag. I literally just thrown a bunch of clothes in. I was out the door and ready (Sort of ) to go to Aims Games. When I got to school we were put into cars for the drive to Taronga, I was put in Ava’s car and the whole way we played snap. Imagine that, playing snap for and hour and a half while eating mint lollies. When we got to the hotel we unpacked and settled into our rooms. For dinner we had big variety of things to choose from. I chose pasta bake and a little potato bake, it was delicious. After that we settled in for bed and went to sleep.( Well we talked for a bit)
The next day we got up to go watch the boys rugby because our only game was at 3:40.We went to the turf and there was a giant salt stack right next to the turf so my lips were really dry.  I can’t really remember who we played but all I know was that we kicked their butts by winning 14-2. The next day we won 1 out of 3 games and were competing for 6th place. On wednesday we only had one game and we won that one 4-2. On Thursday we had two games and we won 1 out of 2. Friday was our last game and we were battling it out for 13th and 14th place. We were siked and ready to play. We started off a little rusty because the other team scored the first goal but then we scored 3 more but then so did they. In the second half we really upped our game by getting 8 goals in the end and the other team got 6. I was so happy that we came 13th out of 38 schools. I can remember lossis more that the wins but I was glad we got a good placing.

Thursday 15 September 2016

Goal Reflection

Winning or losing does not define who we are.   Our attitude and how we hold ourselves does .’ 
That was our goal this week, and I achieved this goal because today when I came to cheek up on my language features doc all of my work had been DELETED, I didn't give up and say " I can't do this, I give up". I thought to myself "It's OK, I'll do it again but this time 3 times better".

Thursday 1 September 2016

Father's Day



My dad is great,
But whenever he’s in charge were always late.
He makes lots of dad jokes that are sorta funny,
And he takes us out to the beach when it’s nice and sunny.
He taught me how to bake and I thank him for that,
But if he keeps eating it all he’s gonna get fat.
He doesn't have a favorite child but I know the truth,
I bet it’s me because I wasn't the kid that made fun of him when he lost his youth.  
He’s loosing hair on the top of his head,
And soon he’ll be lying on his deathbed.
When he makes me breakfast he always burn my toast,
But still i'm the one who loves you the most. xx