Monday, 30 March 2015

My Writing Sample

Just looking at the paddle board gives me shivers down to my toes. Stepping onto something that looks unstable makes me more nervous. It drifts away as I try to get on, one leg on the step and one leg slowly drifting away from me.

 I take a risk and jump to it without thinking for a second. I feel unsteady and wobbly as I collect my confidence . No matter what position I stand I feel like I am going to fall off. I kneeled down until I feel steady and confident enough to stand up .I stood up and kept stiff.Small waves and a bit of wind came gushing towards me and pushing into the coldish water.

I try to jump up but I kept slipping so I push myself up because it was cold.Once I got up I was shaking even more, not wanting to fall again. Pushing with my paddle I glide smoothly across the lake.Going further out to the lake I gained more and more confidence as it seemed so peaceful.  Not watching where I was going I bump into someone and fall again. This time I was FREAKING OUT because we were so far out and just wondering what could be in the water. I spring up quickly and paddled so fast I was already in the shallow. Then I fall off again because someone bumped into me.

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